Friday, 23 September 2016

An Email To A Friend Struggling With An Unhealthy Habit

  1. Write an email to a friend struggling with an unhealthy habit like smoking or alcohol, and suggest a hobby as a replacement, e.g. painting. 
    1. Use the lessons you learnt from this week.
    2. Publish your writing artefact on your e-portfolio.
Hi Li,

How are you?

I had  too much pain from my heart and I called doctor office and got a appointment and I went to see the doctor, and the doctor checked my heart, then told me, you have bad problems from your heart, and the doctor said you must stop smoking, it is a very bad habits, you should change a hobby such as go fishing, do more exercises, hinking, and so on.

I think it's a good suggestion to me.

How do you think?

Best Regards,

Wei Wang




2 comments:

  1. An excellent start! Pls check the following:
    1. Comma splices
    2. Tenses, esp. "had have"
    Keep up the good work!

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